Since I wasn't able to upload my first elevator pitch, this is my first official elevator pitch! Enjoy! Can't wait for your feedback :)
As I mentioned in my pitch MultiCook is your answer if you are a student or someone working at UF that is tired of eating the same and the same or just wants healthier and more diverse options on campus. My business idea is a new on-campus dining hall. Cooks from different restaurants around Gainesville get to cook on campus for students- one different cook each day and different menu every day. The menu is going to include all available options, such as vegan, vegetarian and meat. In addition to that, if students want to save one more plate they can order one from the MultiCook app for half price and take it “to go”. If that is not enough, with every meal you will get discount cards on different local supermarkets so that you can buy groceries for cheaper. Now you get different food options made by your favorite restaurant cooks, in a reasonable price and many other benefits that you’ll never get bored of.
A few things I noticed from my attempt to do the pitch is 1) I couldn't memorize a text of my idea so I just described my idea in my own words and 2) I had to put the different features of the idea in a logical order so that the viewer doesn't get confused or lost in what I was saying. In addition to what I noticed, I also tried to improve my pitch by watching others' pitches. What I didn't want to do that others did is: exceed the time limit, use a webcam and read my speech or say it by heart without emotions. Hope I achieved that!
Artemis your idea and your pitch are great and both have a lot of potential. I understand that you weren't able to upload your first elevator pitch so for a first time you did a great job. You seemed very comfortable and you focused on your strengths. I cant memorize very well either so in a way I kind of improvise some of the fluff in between the facts similar to your approach. If you want to check out my blog feel free my post link is: http://entweekly.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteArtemis, your idea sounds awesome. Improved food on campus would attract many more students to purchase the meal plan. Having different food everyday that is quality and delicious would be great. Getting good food on campus, lets say, is not the easiest. With this new dining hall students will enjoy tasty and healthy food. It will also bring business to the restaurants that provide the food. It really is a win-win. Great idea overall. Check out my pitch at http://ahamuf.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
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