So this is my 3rd elevator pitch. I was really amazed of the number of tries I did, because last time the tries were definitely a lot better. I got only a few comments for feedback. Everyone seemed to love my idea. The only thing I changed that my roommate noticed is move my body less, speak with a stable tone and look straight at the camera more. Enjoy! :)
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No.3
So this is my 3rd elevator pitch. I was really amazed of the number of tries I did, because last time the tries were definitely a lot better. I got only a few comments for feedback. Everyone seemed to love my idea. The only thing I changed that my roommate noticed is move my body less, speak with a stable tone and look straight at the camera more. Enjoy! :)
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Hello,
ReplyDeleteOverall your pitch was good I would just say to be a bit more high pitched and enthusiastic about your idea. You were excited but some parts were a bit dull. Your idea is great though I love it! You were dressed formally too. Great pitch just maybe move around a bit more and be dynamic. Good job.
Here's the link to my elevator pitch, hope you enjoy!
http://jbasta.blogspot.com/2016/03/week-10-elevator-pitch-no-3.html